Do you think that this is a good idea?

It's a little confusing, but once it is written into a story it will be easier to understand. Anyways, I really like the plot of the book and the ideas. I like Kal's character. I also really like your creativity with tthe names, such as the Order of Walpurgis. I the story lines are very strong. I hope someday to be reading the series, or watching the television show! Good Luck